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Far Away Wonderland
Deep breaths
Dancing
Away with my heart
Flee from the darkness
Killing the stars
Well,
Quickly, go quickly!
Enjoy while it lasts
So pure, so new
So beautiful
Free and young and lost and lonely
A castle in the air
Luring me in
Reaching for something
Not really there
Feeling alive
Yet screaming inside
Trying so hard
To change my life
Tired of walking
But running away
Reading the signs
scattered astray
And inaudible whispers
I can just barely hear
Shake the ground
Under my feet
Everywhere I go
Inside my head
There's a whole new world
Tangled and wild,
Bizzare
Crazy, it seems
I tell myself
Yet wind up travelling
The same path again
The words
They confuse me
I can't comprehend
How could I use them
To make any sense?
The words
They don't obey me
They run away
They do not want me
To make a change
I'm overwhelmed
Happens every time
Why can't you hear me?
These words of mine
Enormous, too much
For my little mind
Deep breaths
And dancing
Away with your heart
Flying and fleeing
But not very far
Quickly, quickly!
I don't have much time
How can I reach you?
And get back what's mine?
Deep breaths
Dancing
Away with my heart
Flee from the darkness
Killing the stars
Well,
Quickly, go quickly!
Enjoy while it lasts
So pure, so new
So beautiful
Free and young and lost and lonely
A castle in the air
Luring me in
Reaching for something
Not really there
Feeling alive
Yet screaming inside
Trying so hard
To change my life
Tired of walking
But running away
Reading the signs
scattered astray
And inaudible whispers
I can just barely hear
Shake the ground
Under my feet
Everywhere I go
Inside my head
There's a whole new world
Tangled and wild,
Bizzare
Crazy, it seems
I tell myself
Yet wind up travelling
The same path again
The words
They confuse me
I can't comprehend
How could I use them
To make any sense?
The words
They don't obey me
They run away
They do not want me
To make a change
I'm overwhelmed
Happens every time
Why can't you hear me?
These words of mine
Enormous, too much
For my little mind
Deep breaths
And dancing
Away with your heart
Flying and fleeing
But not very far
Quickly, quickly!
I don't have much time
How can I reach you?
And get back what's mine?
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There's this strange feeling of uncomprehending I get from time to time when I try to express myself and verbalize, explain my feelings and opinions to somebody. I don't know what it is or when it started but sometimes the words just get so... I don't know... It's like... They feel so enormous, I can't express them, I can't get them out. It's a bit bizarre, really. I feel like the words just run away from me and I'm left alone without them, desperately trying to say anything, anything at all.
Have a poem I wrote based on these feelings.
Have a poem I wrote based on these feelings.
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Dear Friend, This poem is very deep. I believe you are crying out for help ~ but not from an individual ~ possibly from within yourself. Perhaps, because of many things that have occurred in your life, you are frozen in time ~ so to speak. You don't want the 'bad things' to happen again in another way. You are growing up in to maturity and you are so very intelligent to realize, with growing comes more responsibilities and perhaps things that you won't be able to handle.
Try not to be so afraid of your feelings and thoughts. You are stronger than all of them combined. Take one moment at a time. Instead of trying to leap into everything and battle them all at once. No one can do this. It they tell you they can, they a perhaps 'fibbing' a little, because they too are afraid of facing life ahead.
There is so much good in your future. Believe it and hang on to this thought. Hold fast to these good and let go of the things that bother and/or frighten you. Invest in your future by doing things you are capable of and improve on them. If you decide to add more, just weigh the outcome on your psyche and nervous system.
I am confident that you will be fine. But right now you won't believe this. In time you will see, it won't be that difficult to grow mature. One step at a time. I know you can do this
And, remember, you do have people who love you very much and will be there for you, if and when you need them.
Reclaim yourself dear ChiuuChiuu ~ and believe in yourself. I do!
PS If you read my Journal Entry, you will see I have to leave here for quite a while. It is a personal/family reason. It has to be. I will miss you dear friend. God bless you always in all ways.
Try not to be so afraid of your feelings and thoughts. You are stronger than all of them combined. Take one moment at a time. Instead of trying to leap into everything and battle them all at once. No one can do this. It they tell you they can, they a perhaps 'fibbing' a little, because they too are afraid of facing life ahead.
There is so much good in your future. Believe it and hang on to this thought. Hold fast to these good and let go of the things that bother and/or frighten you. Invest in your future by doing things you are capable of and improve on them. If you decide to add more, just weigh the outcome on your psyche and nervous system.
I am confident that you will be fine. But right now you won't believe this. In time you will see, it won't be that difficult to grow mature. One step at a time. I know you can do this
And, remember, you do have people who love you very much and will be there for you, if and when you need them.
Reclaim yourself dear ChiuuChiuu ~ and believe in yourself. I do!
PS If you read my Journal Entry, you will see I have to leave here for quite a while. It is a personal/family reason. It has to be. I will miss you dear friend. God bless you always in all ways.